Devontea diamond

[Devontea diamond]

Dovontea diamond

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I’m losing sight

Don’t count on me

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I chase the sun

It chases after me

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{{Highlights}}

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• courageous
  
• joyful
  
• funny
  
• active
  
• willing
  

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• bit over tempered
  
• bad at decision making
  
• sucks at long distance fighting
  
• not very good aim
  
• can't get friends
  

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• being alone
  
• fighting
  
• people that understand him
  
• playing
  

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• being disliked
  
• snobs
  
• stronger people
  
• lazy people
  

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You know my name

You know my face

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• He has not learned any yet he has much to learn
  

Others:
[/ul]He only knows the basic attacks at the moment[/list]
{{Weapons }} Just a regular sword
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You’d know my heart

If you knew my place

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Devontea was walking down the street alone no one in sight it was pouring down rain like little asteroids coming down he could feel the cold stone under his feet he looked up at the dark sky and then looked into the window of all the nice family jumping and having fun inside the house then He Riped away his eye site and kept walking He had to get away from all of these people "they hate me I know they do" He yelled out to the world He started slicing a dicing in rage until He completely fell to the ground with exhaustion then I laughed He didn't  know why but He just keep laughing non stop then Devontea heard movement He stoped laughing straight away and then turned his head He could see someone or something run away he chased it with all his might and then He reached a dead end and there was no one to be seen " am I going mad" He said to himself with a little smirk on his face then slowly walked past all the mice, cobwebs and He also saw a snake along the way and then When he is in the exact same spot again and He heard the noise again but this time He completely ignore it and keep walking "not falling for that again" He whispered to himself as He reached the edge of the town "do i really want to go" He said to himself with a frown then He turned after minuets of thinking and walk back He knew He was going to regret it but He don't care He can't do it He just can't He fell to his knees and cryed He cryed and cryed for ages "I need my family and need my friends but they hate me I know they do" and then He slowly drifted off to sleep He woke up at the crack of dawn and as his eyes slowly opened there infrount of him was a boy and written on the wall said haroma "is that your name" He asked and the boy nods and walks away.......

[roxas]

Change the color=color1 tag to your character's hex.
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You are not playing Sora, remove him from your signature, icon, and change your username to Devo-thing.

[riku]

Apr 7, 2012 21:56:10 GMT -5 admin said:

[6] This site is also designed for semi-literate to literate players and the word limit does reflect that. The majority of web browsers come equipped with spell check and we recommend taking advantage of that. Proper capitalization, spacing, and word usage is expected. Please do NOT post up a block of text – paragraphs make things much easier to read. Any sign of text talk will be dealt with immediately.

• When posting, please italicize and color thoughts, and bold and color verbal text inside of ‘” “’ marks. Do not use any other symbols ( /, <, etc) to denote thoughts or speech.

To be perfectly honest, this app does not qualify as being even semi-literate to me. The history and the sample both need a lot of work.

You also are missing your faceclaim - you need to list the character that you are using - and you need to add in something for physical appearance.